My Mind’s Eye – #BlogBattle

Howdy! It’s #BlogBattle Tuesday hosted by the awesome Rachael Ritchey! Check out the link for the rules and other contestants!

I missed last week and almost didn’t make it this week! But some inspiration prevailed and I apologize for submitting you to my painful attempts at poetry. Every so often I give rhyming a try and since no amount of Oreos was going to help me write a story, this is what I came up with. This week’s word was EYE. Enjoy!

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There is a place

Where worlds are born

All in my mind’s eye

 

There is a place

Where heroes rise

And villains fall

And simple men hear a call

All in my mind’s eye

 

There is a place

Where hope is lost

And love is won

And battles rage for a kingdom

All in my mind’s eye

 

There is a place

Where swords are forged

And spears are cast

And dragons breathe a fiery blast

All in my mind’s eye

 

There is a place

Where brothers stand

And sisters fight

And family bonds are tight

All in my mind’s eye

 

There is a place

Where the world is right

All bathed in light

All in my mind’s eye

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There you go! I welcome any critiques you might have!!

Remember to read all the stories and vote for your top THREE on Rachael’s blog starting tomorrow!

 

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